ENGLISH HUB
Writing · C2 · task 2 · band 9

Task 2: Does Globalisation Erode or Enrich Local Cultures?

Study the prompt and the model, then practise the same structure.

The Question

Some people argue that globalisation inevitably erodes local cultures, while others contend that it enriches them through exchange. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Write at least 250 words.

Model answer

It is fashionable to lament globalisation as a homogenising force that flattens the world’s cultural diversity into a single, blandly commercial monoculture. The anxiety is not baseless. As multinational brands colonise high streets from Lima to Lagos, and as a handful of streaming platforms dictate what billions watch, distinctive local traditions can indeed be marginalised, surviving, if at all, as quaint performances staged for tourists.

Yet this declinist account mistakes visibility for dominance. Cultures have never been hermetically sealed; they have always evolved through contact, borrowing, and reinvention. What globalisation accelerates is precisely this age-old process of exchange. A young musician in Seoul can absorb American hip-hop and refract it through Korean sensibilities to produce something genuinely new that then conquers Western charts in turn. The traffic, in other words, is rarely one-directional, and the recipient culture is seldom a passive victim. It adapts, resists, and appropriates on its own terms.

My own view is that the dichotomy is a false one. Globalisation is neither inherently corrosive nor automatically enriching; its effect depends on the agency exercised by the communities it touches. Where local institutions are robust and self-confident, external influences become raw material for renewal rather than instruments of erasure. Where they are weak or politically neglected, vulnerability follows.

The decisive variable, then, is not exposure but resilience. Rather than futilely attempting to wall cultures off, societies would do better to invest in the education, funding, and pride that allow a tradition to engage the world without dissolving into it.

How this answer scores
  • A C2 response controls register and uses precise, low-frequency lexis without straining for it.
  • Concede the opposing view genuinely before refuting it — nuance signals maturity.
  • Vary sentence architecture: let a short, emphatic sentence land after a complex one.
Practise — write your own

Try the same prompt yourself, then compare with the model above.

0 words · aim for 250

Autosaves on this device

Get Instant AI IELTS Score

Configure your Gemini API key in settings to receive a precise band score, criteria breakdown, sentence corrections, and an improved draft revision.